dijous, 11 de maig del 2017

SELECTIVITY WRITING 3

Spain is significantly below the OECD average in PISA test. What do you think is needed to improve our education system? Write an opinion essay in which you take into account the school system, the teachers and the students. 


OUR SCHOOL SYSTEM
As the OECD average in PISA test, Spain is significantly below. The intelligence of spanish people isn't less than people from other countries so the difference remains on the spanish education system. 

From my point of view the problem is that students don't feel luckly to have the right of education. They are forced to study and for them studuiong is a thing most of time they don't want to do. Also they are obligated to study subjects they don't like. As a result students are not motivated to learn as it means time and efford. Also teachers are not conscious that students have differents ways to learn and also different kinds of intelligence. 

In conclusion the education at system in my opinion is not well focused on what it should be. Finally I think the system should be more open-minded in order to see the gaps it has. 




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